This photo was shot in Gao Xiong City. We went to Gao xiong in last summer vacation for three days. We have nearly gone to Gao xiong all famous scenic spots. Like Qi Jin(旗津) for the beautiful sea and riding bicycle; Xi zi wan(西子灣) for the sunset. I felt very happy in those three days. I will remember the wonderful vacation forever.
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Dear Fish:
I like your picture. All three of you are pretty and lively. The sky is breathtakingly beautiful, too. However, the spelling of Gao Xing City doesn’t sound right. Besides, “the declining sun” is not a proper expression. Lastly, please rephrase the sentence “We went most off all scenic spots”.
I really like this picture because I know all of the people in the picture. But I think the most special picture in your blog is on the top of the website. It is no doubt that you will remember this trip and the photo.